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Aet Lindling

  • Welcome Mat Re: We are the CRA

    ROFL, no one's getting what it stands for yet!? This is so funny... And no, I won't tell you...

    Oct 16, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Tragic Tale of Young Epic Romance, Eragon, etc.

    :snrt: No way, Aet! ...was he stuck up or anything? xD Well, duh. Not that I thought so at the time, though.

    Oct 16, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: Critique the Person Above You!

    It good! Could be a bit longer though... I'll review in a sec... Also, the link thing is done like so. [ur l=yayness]Yayness.[/url] only no space between r and l ...

    Oct 16, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: Critique the Person Above You!

    Awww... *feels sad* No fair. Seconds within each other, too!

    Oct 16, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: Critique the Person Above You!

    Yay, I was hoping you'd do that one! So no complaint, really. XD Johnny Appletree

    Oct 16, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Johnny Appletree

    "“What’s so dangerous about seeds?” He asked. Maybe Max was allergic? He wondered." Don't capitalize either "he". "Cant eat fruit.” He said flatly." Ditto here, and add an apostrophe in ...

    Oct 16, 2007
  • Randomosity Re: Isn't Being Alive the Greatest?

    "OMG ITS FUN TO BREATHE!!" ftw!

    Oct 16, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi ^^

    Welcome! What friend would that be? Also, to be brutally honest, your grammar could use some work. Anyways, hope you become an active member. This place is seriously very sweet.

    Oct 16, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Tragic Tale of Young Epic Romance, Eragon, etc.

    Yes, she did. I have a confession-- I did too. Saw Paolini and got Eldest signed, too. I just may read Empire (my guess on what it'll most likely be ...

    Oct 16, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Fingers (flash fic)

    I don't know why I decided to write about pickpocketing in the first person... just seemed original and I was badly aching to write something. Besides, sillyness is all very ...

    Oct 16, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Cra-yon Lay-onds 4: The Lands of Crayolla

    wc13: Hehe, I often have no idea what when I'm writing the chapters either. Razor: Oh good, not as sucky as I thought then. Linds: Okay, not sucky a single ...

    Oct 16, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: Critique the Person Above You!

    Ten Years, Twenty-Eight Days Crit me with your best. Okay, bad pun, I'm sorry. *sits in corner*

    Oct 16, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Whisky on a Sunday: Year 1

    This is a very interesting idea, and I hope you'll post more. Very good storytelling and dialogue too. I... can't find any grammar or spelling errors, and I'm horrible at ...

    Oct 16, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: Critique the Person Above You!

    Aw, come on! I made this review... and then Razor steals my spot. Well, I need to review more anyway, so I'll do Razor too. :) This is my review, ...

    Oct 16, 2007
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: YWS Highwind

    "Staring Clicked a few buttons and the Highwind zipped into space faster than light." You mean "clicked". Also, you may want to replace this with "tapped" because of this: "Adam ...

    Oct 16, 2007


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